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    dots Submission Name: Flavourdots
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    Author: Broken-lands
    ASL Info:    14/female/here
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 22/38/44
    Words: 238
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 107
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1470



    Description:
       i got inspired, i know. YEARS of not writing something new (: Inspired in the song i was listening to.
    Thnks to: Alexander.

    btw, the Kanji at the begining, [kanji: chinese symbol, which is used as japanese in this] means Aji, which means Taste, i was looking for flavour but found that. ~–¡. The picture is some random one i found who included the words i was looking for xdd so there it is.

    [EDIT] the Kanji is not supported u__u so it's not there anymore. S:


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    the way that people smile,
    the way that people laugh.
    doesn't it give you this flavour full of joy?
    it makes you feel amazing and full,
    it makes you feel happy and alive.

    The happiness it brought was a bit too much,
    the real world when it's delightful essence
    touched your lips, your toungue, it brought
    you down to the earth, to the real world we
    live in, reside in, exist in.

    Do you even know what it is to be alive?
    We say we know it all, we say we've seen it all.
    We're dead in the world of the truth and fakes.
    We're stuck in the essence of hope and reality.
    I remeber when you said you were happy,
    you said you were truly happy.
    You seemed so real and so loyal to your word.
    You seemed so touched and agravated when
    it went away.

    Don't give hope away,
    keep it close to you, where you can take it again.
    We say we know it all, but we haven't even
    tried to think,
    we haven't brought that cup to out lips,
    slipped the red wine, down to out throats.
    We don't even know what life is about yet,
    it can't just be about life and death.
    We don't even know the flavour being alive,
    trying to survive, and succeeding until the very last.




    Submitted on 2008-09-02 02:17:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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