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    dots Submission Name: lovedots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 649
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       To the love of my life.. :)
    Abigail Tan


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    dotslovedots
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    Being in love, is one thing,
    Knowing who to love, is a whole new feeling.
    Showing care when doesnít seem needed,
    Showing gratefulness when it seems un-greeted.

    The power of words is beyond comparison,
    To this girl of compassion,
    The one place where Iíve kept secret,
    Is now hers in possession.




    Submitted on 2008-09-02 13:09:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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