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    dots Submission Name: Surviving Sorndots
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    Author: mojymo
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 50/59/41
    Words: 292
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSurviving Sorndots
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    For Sorn


    Most minds have enough space to move around, but yours...
    yours trips me up, and I find
    myself turned around and inside out, my eyes
    barely catching a glimpse of what you say. It'd
    be nice to open you up, your lid creaking, to see the treasure you hold close to your heart. There's something more behind your barriers, something that draws me in for a closer look. You think
    that you're some kind of prince, conceited but
    not unbearable. You
    rake your power across my skin, leaving
    scars that will never fade. You're
    a battlefield in my mind. I
    fasten my helmet tightly but do not
    carry a gun as I jump out of the trench and
    prepare to search your mind once more. Your
    complexity has me jumping out of my skin in
    fear. What will I discover this time? Sometimes
    when I tell you about myself, I fear the worst. Things you could say crawl through my own mind. I've got a lot of space in there, and my thoughts shimmer in and out. Yours
    are solid stones dropping into
    all the right places, their words and meaning
    tumbling into the perfect spot, piecing
    the puzzle together neatly. When
    things fall apart, you are there to
    stitch them back together again. Suddenly
    I run back to the trench, your words
    launching themselves at me like
    cannonballs! The roar of a close fire
    chases me forward, the crack and boom of
    another shot of words hits me in the back.
    Instantly I am thrown to the ground but not destroyed, and, looking up, I see you standing beside me, offering your hand. Your
    words have saved me yet again.

    End: 11:23pm
    Tues. Sept. 2, 08




    Submitted on 2008-09-03 03:28:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this shows very powerful expression of emotions
    it made me feel like you were afraid to speak your mind

    | Posted on 2008-09-05 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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