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Author: Raivn
ASL Info:    33/f/al
Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222 /916 /231
Words: 187
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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To my love, Nazz...


You have the most amazing eyes
That see me instead of just looking through
And lips that I can't help but touch
There's nothing quite like kissing you
Your hands have swept me off my feet
In both a literal and figurative way
And your mind never fails to amaze
You astound me every day
No-one's perfect and we both fall short
Of the world's unrelenting bar
But every moment spent with you, I'm in awe
Of the wonder that you are
One look from you and I feel wanted,
Loved and desired
And you're the only one I know
That can both stoke and quench this fire
I could spend a lifetime walking beside you,
Fingers intertwined,
Loving every precious smile
Marveling that you're mine.
I knew the moment your lips touched mine
You were all I was searching for
I want to belong to no one but you
Every second, I love you more.
And when I take stock of all my life,
Going from here back to the start,
You're the best thing I've ever known
And you'll forever possess my heart.

Submitted on 2008-09-03 05:28:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  again nice styla. it flowed every well i like it.. hes a lucky guy for u to be this in love with him
| Posted on 2008-09-03 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]

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