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    dots Submission Name: getting over someonedots
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    Author: Midnight Shadow
    ASL Info:    19/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 47/143/118
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 167
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    Bytes: 459



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    dotsgetting over someonedots
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    you know what is driving me crazy
    knowing that i never got over you
    i lay there, brushing back my hair
    wondering what i did so wrong
    you left me hanging high and dry
    and yet my feelings are so damn strong
    I just want to get over you
    but i cant seem to let go
    so i get to sit here
    writing a stupid poem
    trying to explain every frustrating thing i feel
    but i cant put it into words...




    Submitted on 2008-09-04 03:35:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the blatant pain of this. You didn't feel the need to make it rhyme but nonetheless it has a certain rhythm of its own. [censored] the cunt. Nobody can make you feel inferior without your consent!

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    | Posted on 2008-09-05 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]
      i have feedback. if he ever did anything unmanly, forget him. if he ever didn't protect you, forget him. if he slept with another girl, forget him. if he says he doesn't love you, love yourself. and if you want to know the answer, call him and ask him if he loves you, and if he has nothing to say, let go, and love yourself. he's not worth pain.
    | Posted on 2008-09-05 00:00:00 | by graffitijeans | [ Reply to This ]


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