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    dots Submission Name: Upside Down c. by ruejacobs 9/4/08 12:50 a.m.dots
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    Author: ruejacobs
    ASL Info:    37/feminazi/Gehenna
    Elite Ratio:    4.91 - 566/440/154
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 272
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       Mushroom cloud in my mouth


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    dotsUpside Down c. by ruejacobs 9/4/08 12:50 a.m.dots
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    Dangling from my vocal cords
    Suspended like a cat
    Nape of neck
    Shivering pearl
    I clamp down
    Clamshell tight
    I could batter myself blue
    As a subdermal bruise
    And still you want to be a puppeteer
    Listen
    I am not your doll
    You might dethrone the deity, but
    It’s a three day deal
    I’ll be back, I’ll be back
    Let there be no other gods before me
    I had tea with Persephone
    And Ereshkegal is my other name
    Do not think to use your hounds
    You know what comes of that
    I am not the queen of heaven or hearth
    Lichen white as my flesh is
    The flaking mold that you
    brushed from tomb stone
    Is vapor now
    I am smoke and mirrors
    Your hands will close on thin air
    I need no worshipper to prove my divinity
    Some ambition you had, then, Love
    You cannot possess ash




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      hmmmmm

    reading this aloud makes me feel cold.
    and weirdly enough, I get this picture in my head of a hand, a mixed drink, and eyes that could drop someone. and I am not sure why but then I have a strange imagination (I am reminded of an Aunt though, one that could be particularly severe, biting even).

    Ereshkegal is very interesting here. (I had to look up as I wasn't familiar)

    'You might dethrone the deity, but
    It’s a three day deal
    I’ll be back, I’ll be back'

    I love this bit.

    What I really like is how it is almost a talking to self and someone else.

    and nobody can control dust
    because it simply isn't there

    brrrrr
    | Posted on 2008-09-05 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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