I really enjoyed reading that poem. I think you have a lot of talent and I love your choice of words and discrptions. "The trees are upside down Floating in the sea The perfect picture Of this life and me" This was my favorite part. It's a great way to discride life I think.
As with the person who's work I read before yours, you have raw talent, but you need to hone it. Save for a few minor errors, you did an excellent job. First off, I suggest adding some punctuation at the end of each line. Second, change "to" to "too" in the beginning of the third stanza.
Submission Name: Painting
