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    dots Submission Name: No love like a mothersdots
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    Author: Midnight Shadow
    ASL Info:    19/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 46/132/94
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 41
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 345



    Description:
       I'm not a mother...but I wrote this line "there is no innocence like the innocence i feel when i look into the eyes of a child" and i felt that it would be perfect to write a mother poem. Please comment.


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    dotsNo love like a mothersdots
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    I might not be strong, but i can protect her
    When trouble comes down, i promise i'll be there
    As she grows up I'll be there through the tears and smiles
    i'll wrap my angel in my wings and nothing will harm her
    there is no innocence like the innocence i feel when i look into the eyes of a child




    Submitted on 2008-09-04 22:10:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was beautiful and very true. I'm not a mother myself, but empathy is a gift to me and when I see a mother and her child it seems to be exactly like this. Keep up the fantastic work, and I'll keep reading

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    | Posted on 2008-09-04 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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