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    dots Submission Name: grown.dots
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    Author: graffitijeans
    ASL Info:    20/f/houston
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 281/392/143
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsgrown.dots
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    i'm grown.
    honestly, don't trust anyone.
    no, honestly, i'm not making this up.
    i know sometimes in life, you seek out someone.
    been there too many times.
    i'm grown.
    i've experienced life.
    i'm grown.
    life is all about steps.
    don't take the steps you don't know.
    curiousity isn't cheeky.
    curiousity is stupid.
    do you see the difference?
    when the little voice says i don't think you should do this, listen.
    not just most of the time.
    all of the time.
    the little voice is your soul.
    and trust me, your soul has a whole lot more worth than your mind and body.
    and what i mean by this is,
    your mind and body are much more primative than your soul.
    but unfortunately in the society we live in, our minds and bodies are the stars of the show.
    but our souls are struggling to be heard nowadays.
    listen, just listen.
    to neglect that little voice, is to be as bad as this society neglecting our souls.
    our souls need to lead the way.
    minds and bodies get ill.
    souls are pure.
    the only way to protect your minds and bodies is to let your soul lead.
    if i die tomorrow, this is all i hope humanity learns.




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      20 and grown.. most people would laugh at you for saying that, you are not even of drinking age.. i am almost 18 and i know what you mean .... age is just a damn number ... your maturity level is in how much you have experienced and lived through not your age... your only as mature(grown) as you want to after that age of 16 (in my opinion). this poem is really great and i think of teens and adults can relate to it... keep it up. ur a really talented writer


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