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    dots Submission Name: Once Bitten Twice Shydots
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    Author: rosesrouges
    ASL Info:    19/f/sg
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 32/42/42
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsOnce Bitten Twice Shydots
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    "Once bitten twice shy"
    And so this is how the story goes.

    Her arms locked and entagled in solitude.
    Confused and unwilling to hope for she fears,
    that the magic of any snakecharmers might -
    bring her again re-living the start of forlorn tears.

    She stands by her beliefs - but she sits by her faith.
    Her stonewall is amended but nay, it will rupture again.
    For every foul infringement to her wall -
    she grips tightly the rope of the pure.
    For every bridge she build, she had spent hours to repaint.

    She dares not, for quite simple - she is afraid.
    For she is human.
    For she has expectations that she knows are disparate.

    ---

    You do not know how much pain it takes for her to talk to you.
    You do not know how much pain it is for her to know that you would leave - just like the rest.
    You do not know how much she will regret then.
    You leave when you will get bored.
    She stays throughout and she PRETENDS to be bored.
    So don't you dare make her like you.
    Or ......

    ........im coming to punch you ^_^




    Submitted on 2008-09-06 07:47:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      is this supposed to be 2 separate pieces? i like the 1st part. i like the beginning. feel like it's better to be alone and safe than take a chance on getting hurt again. thanx for the read....luv and rock....ash
    | Posted on 2008-09-07 00:00:00 | by foreverevolt | [ Reply to This ]


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