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    dots Submission Name: Life, oh lifedots
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    Author: Maskannai
    ASL Info:    25/Female/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.91 - 171/158/67
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Just something that kinda popped out in a journal on another website..


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    dotsLife, oh lifedots
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    Life,
    Oh life...
    What can I say for you?

    Sometimes things are up
    and sometimes they are down,
    Many times
    you take the easy road
    and yet other times
    you take that high hard road...

    And in the end
    I am always proud
    to call you MY life.




    Submitted on 2008-09-06 21:04:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Gullibilities and falacies seem to stalk us and stumble our paths yet in our quiet moments we are enabled to rectify what we can and the other insolubles we cast off as scrupulosities. This is a nice write to which I see a religious undertone.
    | Posted on 2008-09-07 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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