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    dots Submission Name: that faulty organ centered in my chestdots
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    Author: Cannablisjunkie
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Indianapolis, IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 77/147/87
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 737
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 566



    Description:
       I know it's not very poetic in the senc of the rhyming scheme but, it's a poem of sorts. thoughts on this would be lovely, thanks in advance.


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    dotsthat faulty organ centered in my chestdots
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    This room is cold, completely dark and the floor is hard like concrete. I can smell his cigar, almost feel the warm burn of the cherry as it glows each time he inhales.

    This must be the heart, I made it. I'm inside.

    As, I float in the array of order in which your blood flows. Streaming every which way your blood does. It starts to get dark.

    Your lungs are as black as soot, and I feel drunker than ever as I choke, nearly sinking amidst this crimson sea.

    And, as always, you've got me




    Submitted on 2008-09-07 16:29:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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