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    dots Submission Name: Take. Keep. Please.dots
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    Author: Oli
    ASL Info:    23/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 206/211/53
    Words: 307
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 769
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    dotsTake. Keep. Please.dots
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    Fall
    hard
    break
    cry
    Sit
    stand
    try
    with thoughts of destruction

    Fall
    harder
    shatter
    close
    stay
    down
    longer
    faith slipping as the days pass

    I
    give
    you
    my
    heart
    take.
    keep.
    please.
    Never whole again.




    Submitted on 2008-09-07 18:15:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like the idea that love is an up down staircase as your format implies. I guess such would be the case if one started to 'cry' on the first set of stairs. Then started to 'close ' on second set and gave one's self away at 'heart' on third set.
    | Posted on 2008-09-08 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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