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    dots Submission Name: Take. Keep. Please.dots
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    Author: Oli
    ASL Info:    20/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.3 - 202/206/52
    Words: 307
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 76
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 725



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       Abut a friend...


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    dotsTake. Keep. Please.dots
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    Fall
    
     hard
    
            break
    
                     cry
    
                Sit
    
       stand
    
try
    
    with thoughts of destruction
    

    
Fall 
    
     harder
    
               shatter
    
                           close
    
                   stay
    
          down 
    
longer
    
          faith slipping as the days pass
    

    
  I 
    
      give
    
              you 
    
                     my
    
                           heart
    
                    take.
    
           keep.
    
please.
    
            Never whole again.




    Submitted on 2008-09-07 18:15:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like the idea that love is an up down staircase as your format implies. I guess such would be the case if one started to 'cry' on the first set of stairs. Then started to 'close ' on second set and gave one's self away at 'heart' on third set.
    | Posted on 2008-09-08 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]



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