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    dots Submission Name: Musicdots
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    Author: Oli
    ASL Info:    23/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 206/211/53
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 641
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 150



    Description:
       Sometimes I wish life had it's own soundtrack.


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    dotsMusicdots
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    It takes me
    I'm gone
    leave me alone
    the rhyme makes me smile
    gone
    I'm gone
    talk to me in a minute




    Submitted on 2008-09-07 19:50:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A good assay of listening to music,but I think the song or interlude did not do music justice if it is only a minute long. (as the last line says.)
    If last twowords in last line were just an hypernated expression they should be in quotes (which says that which it is not).

    Enjoyed the read.
    | Posted on 2008-09-08 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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