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Blaming Game


Author: Raindrops
ASL Info:    25/f/Pennsylvania
Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 184 /213 /288
Words: 119
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Written on August 9, 2008.


Blaming Game



They way he left me
to drown in my own pain
Do I not have the power
to chase the madness away

My heart is bleeding
when there was no reply
Just a condemning look
and not even a goodbye

I'll take care of everything
just you wait and see
Maybe you'll come home happy
and even smile at me

Make my day brighter
cuz right now I'm so alone
my body's so tired
and I feel like I've been drowned...

in my own stupidity
of throwing blame around.
I guess it doesn't matter
as long as we're still together

and love can be our center
to never lose sight of.




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  More caring and lovely thoughts from a lovely lady! They say "love conquers all".
| Posted on 2008-09-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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