My Little Secret by Childe-Wrote

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Submission Name: My Little Secret dots

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Author:	Childe-Wrote
Elite Ratio:	1.86 - 17/47/39
Words:	80

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	64
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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My Little Secret dots

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It was curiosity that fueled the fire
My mind made up in twenty four hours

Your mother wasn't home tonight
So we had our fun for just one night

Standing here in my regrets
Consequences I now face

These dreams now broken
Pulled down, now choking

Life growing inside
Patience now gone

When the time comes
My mind is made up

You'll be my adorable
Oh so little secret

That much is true...

Submitted on 2008-09-09 02:28:28 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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AWE! This poem was So Cute!!!!!! Made me smile! Love it! Good Write!
| Posted on 2008-09-09 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]

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