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    dots Submission Name: My Little Secretdots
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    Author: Childe-Wrote
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 17/53/44
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy Little Secretdots
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    It was curiosity that fueled the fire
    My mind made up in twenty four hours

    Your mother wasn't home tonight
    So we had our fun for just one night

    Standing here in my regrets
    Consequences I now face

    These dreams now broken
    Pulled down, now choking

    Life growing inside
    Patience now gone

    When the time comes
    My mind is made up

    You'll be my adorable
    Oh so little secret

    That much is true...




    Submitted on 2008-09-09 02:28:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      AWE! This poem was So Cute!!!!!! Made me smile! Love it! Good Write!
    | Posted on 2008-09-09 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]


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