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    dots Submission Name: Betrayaldots
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    Author: Jaymz
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 2/5/61
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 412
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 552



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    dotsBetrayaldots
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    Betrayal, is the very evil that controls us
    betrayal, is the very thing that we must
    betrayal, stop us from living life the right way
    betrayal, happens to us every day
    you might think its right to stay apart
    but in the other persons eyes
    you are breaking their heart
    no matter what you believe to be true
    with betrayal, theres no me and you
    how could you treat me this way
    I was there for you everyday
    this is where my story ends
    goodbye
    I hope your wounds mend




    Submitted on 2008-09-09 17:11:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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