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    dots Submission Name: Escape Routedots
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    Author: xieno
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 7/16/24
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 541
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1294



    Description:
       Idk going through lots right now.
    This won't really make much sense to anyone. I barely understand it. It probably sucks even.But it has meaning, believe me.

    I'll be okay. :]


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    dotsEscape Routedots
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    With every wrongdoing there seems to be vengeance
    In this case, karma can really be a bitch
    It's weird how you can cry so much on the outside
    While still feeling next to nothing on the inside
    Maybe I can make myself believe I don't deserve this

    What could I have done though?

    The infinite plastic feelings I can wield so I can deal
    What does it matter? You make it feel so useless
    Defenseless, stop saying things like you're used to hurting
    If you could see my heart it would be so obvious
    You can feel like the fool this ride around

    There used to be a time where I lusted for a sting
    To feel alive because I wasn't living, just sorta existing
    Everything, it just felt good to hurt
    But now that theres a reason, I'm not just some girl
    Wanting to belong to something cause she didn't know the world
    It all seems kind of inane looking back on it now
    You never feel pain until you feel like I do now

    I guess I'm still that girl in some oddball sort of way
    Anything but nothing, I guess thats all I'm trying to say
    Sometimes we all need an escape route
    Help me find mine?




    Submitted on 2008-09-10 02:30:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Going to sound weird,
    But some of this makes sense to me.
    And you sound almost like my friend, which is good...
    | Posted on 2008-09-13 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]


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