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    Author: truefruit06
    ASL Info:    14/m/IN
    Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6/22/44
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 704
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 777



    Description:
       this was just something random try to find your color


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    for those of black
    you have depression
    your eyes are darkness
    your soul in recession

    for those of red
    you have love
    stomach in knots
    burning for it

    for those of blue
    you have sadness
    crying overly
    wanting death

    for those of yellow
    you have happiness
    your peppy attitude
    can annoy others

    those of purple
    have confusion
    can't say it right...
    or think it

    those of brown
    you have anger
    like a brown bull
    seeing red

    those of orange
    ...are etreamly creepy
    do weird things
    and maybe go to rehab




    Submitted on 2008-09-10 12:51:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      sweet words from someone so confused
    but thats life i think we are all a bit confused
    | Posted on 2008-09-25 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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