i read one of your other poems so i dicided to check out more. this one was ok i lkied it- butand so many rules
this angel "broke"
but its always sad
to see a fallen angel
was intence, it totally threw me off wasnt expecting that great end to it....
i lkie your stuff indivitually, but it seems as if you have the same like rythem, style, and construction in all of them. there good, but try mixin it up a bit some time