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Love and Life- A fusion

Author: Gothic Misery
ASL Info:    25/F/NV
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Words: 220
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Love and Life- A fusion

Just try to see in the dark
But if I had your faith
To hold you in my arms
And wait
For something to happen
Fear falls down like rain
Take me as I am
My thoughts break me
Life is something we can learn and grow,
Faith is something we feel and show
A change of life is hard to find
And there's no peace of mind
If you ever need somebody to love and be there-you can count on me
Well, I never thought I would change my ways
Such an angry thought
Slowly fading, I'll be there to pick you up
Is this more than you can keep
Does it speak to you when you sleep
Maybe I'm naive
I expect open ears and hearts
No returns-I've always know
Having a smile and staring for awhile
Love to see you
I feel indebt to your love and my heart aches
The heavens open their eyes and my heart sings
It’s the little things you say
Every feeling around me
Love in us as we play and dance
I was so lost and you saved me
Sailing away from fusion
My heart a breeze conquered
Knowing just what to do
Afraid of the unexpected
I'll learn to try-
With you forever by my side.

Submitted on 2008-09-10 17:11:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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