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can you do it


Author: truefruit06
ASL Info:    14/m/IN
Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6 /22 /44
Words: 40
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Description:




can you do it



you hold the knife
can you cut her
draw her blood

you hold her life
can you shatter
all you care about

you let her slip
through your fingers
and now shes gone

what will you do




Submitted on 2008-09-10 18:37:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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