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self reflection


Author: truefruit06
ASL Info:    14/m/IN
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Words: 42
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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self reflection



my self reflection
is it real
is that what i want to see

my visual image
is it true
am i really happy

my self reflection
which hides in darkness
laughing on the inside

yet dying on the outside




Submitted on 2008-09-10 18:41:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Deep, but simple and great writing, i liked the two last lines:
lauging on the inside
yet dying on the outside
| Posted on 2008-09-11 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]


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