This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17.
It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different.
All content will be deleted. Backup anything important.
--- Staff
Roleplay Cloud -
 

  Off

Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password
Roleplay | Viral news today | Music Theory

your soft spoken words


Author: truefruit06
ASL Info:    14/m/IN
Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6 /22 /44
Words: 81
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
Total Views: 497
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 449



Description:

this goes to my boyfriend i hope he likes it


your soft spoken words


as you hold me in your arms
and tell me that you love me
the soft words ring in my ear

as you kiss me with your warmth
and push upon my body
your soft skin gives me chills

as you love me with your smile
and make it well known
the soft look makes my heart pump

as you tell me that you love me'
and pull me in close
the soft words ring in my ear




Submitted on 2008-09-10 18:51:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments



Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?		7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



165544

EliteSkills

  Roleplay
  Top News