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    dots Submission Name: Sally and Sully Get Steweddots
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    Author: ErgoIgo
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 585/676/277
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       WARNING: Just a little spicy and a bit off color.


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    dotsSally and Sully Get Steweddots
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    So Sully says to Sally should we maybe share
    some sensuous sex some day?
    Sally to Sully squints and squirms at the dare
    slowly shifting into a sashay.

    She secretly shared his steamy salaciousness
    since she’s seen it on the screen.
    Sully slyly slid some superior porn I guess
    so Sally should study the scene.

    Sally shined as a student scoring solid A’s,
    she swooned at the stimulation.
    Sully surveyed Sally’s sinfully staring gaze.
    Soon she’d suggest simulation.

    Sully and Sally sought the sweetest sweat,
    seriously seeking satisfaction.
    Swiftly shedding society’s shame they set
    smoldering sin into fiery action.

    Sully showed Sally his stiff staff shamelessly
    Sally saw something succulent.
    Sul steered Sally’s sweet mouth, not aimlessly
    she sucked ‘til old Sul was spent.

    Suffice to say Sal and Sul shared the shank of the day
    sucking, slurping the sweet dew.
    Sampling and swapping students, the Karma Sutra way,
    Sal and Sul shared a sexual stew.




    Submitted on 2008-09-10 20:48:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Skip supper anytime for some sexual stew! Pretty steamy bowl too, this one is!

    Nice going, Pete!
    | Posted on 2008-09-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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