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Southern Pleasure


Author: ErgoIgo
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Southern Pleasure



Spanish moss hanging
Really looks for all the world
Like the tears of trees




Submitted on 2008-09-10 20:49:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That is does! Tears of the Trees; that is novel, and very poetic!

Nice to see you posting again, Pete!
| Posted on 2008-09-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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