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Southern Pleasure
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ErgoIgo
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Southern Pleasure
Spanish moss hanging
Really looks for all the world
Like the tears of trees
Submitted on 2008-09-10 20:49:44
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That is does! Tears of the Trees; that is novel, and very poetic!
Nice to see you posting again, Pete!
| Posted on 2008-09-10 00:00:00 | by
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