Southern Pleasure

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Southern Pleasure

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Spanish moss hanging Really looks for all the world Like the tears of trees

Submitted on 2008-09-10 20:49:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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That is does! Tears of the Trees; that is novel, and very poetic! Nice to see you posting again, Pete!

| Posted on 2008-09-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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