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    dots Submission Name: Southern Pleasuredots
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    Author: ErgoIgo
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    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    dotsSouthern Pleasuredots
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    Spanish moss hanging
    Really looks for all the world
    Like the tears of trees




    Submitted on 2008-09-10 20:49:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That is does! Tears of the Trees; that is novel, and very poetic!

    Nice to see you posting again, Pete!
    | Posted on 2008-09-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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