Southern Pleasure by ErgoIgo

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Submission Name: Southern Pleasure dots

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Author:	ErgoIgo
Elite Ratio:	3.32 - 585/676/277
Words:	15

Class/Type:	Haiku/Misc
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Southern Pleasure dots

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Spanish moss hanging
Really looks for all the world
Like the tears of trees

Submitted on 2008-09-10 20:49:44 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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That is does! Tears of the Trees; that is novel, and very poetic!

Nice to see you posting again, Pete!
| Posted on 2008-09-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.