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    dots Submission Name: Your Beloved Parasitedots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 29/77/70
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 844
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1573



    Description:
       cRAZY LITTLE sONG i wROTE wHILE lISTENING tO Mia by Chevelle of their Point #1 Album. iT'S aCTUALLY iN tHE tUNE oF Mia. sO lISTEN tO tHE sONG aND rEAD tHIS, iTS fUCKIN' aWESOME!


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    dotsYour Beloved Parasitedots
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    You let me in
    To clean your skin
    But I am something...
    Else!

    I close my eyes
    When I'm inside
    Touch something I've never...
    Felt!

    I give you pleasure
    It makes me clever
    I hear you...
    Scream!

    I twist I turn
    I make you yearn
    Then I eat your...
    Cream!

    ((CHORUS))
    I'm your...
    Parasite

    Always your...
    Parasiiite

    Now and forever
    We'll be together
    Your...
    Paaaarasite!

    I'm your...
    Parasite,
    Promise you,
    I'll always bite

    Yea, your...
    Parasite

    ----------
    You ran and hid
    Bumped your head
    And now your...
    No!

    I brought you back
    From the black
    And you said...
    "So?!"

    But you don't care
    That we both share
    The same...
    Soul!

    ((CHORUS))

    When I'm gone
    There'll be no dawn
    I'll be...
    Missed!

    Watched you fiddle
    But I'm too little
    To be...
    Kissed!

    You can't see me
    But you can breath me
    I'm...
    Outta-sight!

    You're what I need
    You're my feed
    I'm your...
    Parasite!!



    ((CHORUS))



    *!SQUISH!*




    Submitted on 2008-09-11 01:45:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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