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    dots Submission Name: Out of Reachdots
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    Author: Undiskuvrd
    ASL Info:    14/f/Aus
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/2/1
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 592
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsOut of Reachdots
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    As I sat and looked at that beach...
    I wondered if there was a way to reach.
    Reach for the stars without leaving that place,
    I wondered if I could disappear without a trace?

    My life is tough,
    And it's just as rough,
    and I wish it could be as easy as that beach...

    That life for me... Is out of reach... In my dreams




    Submitted on 2008-09-11 01:53:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmmm.
    You are trying to force it.
    Just let it come natrually, and enjoy it.
    You'll get there.

    ~Grr~
    | Posted on 2008-09-13 00:00:00 | by GrIm:)ReApEr | [ Reply to This ]
      hello,it's ok,maybe you need to use more your imagination.try to live your words with your feelings.don't let technical things spoil your poem.and in the end,good luck & keep faith in life(there is always good...somewhere).
    | Posted on 2008-09-11 00:00:00 | by sitel | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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