Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Foolish storys


Author: grimmreaper
Elite Ratio:    8 - 122 /43 /23
Words: 439
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
Total Views: 1346
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 2840



Description:


slightly inspired by the first boy I really ever liked. he played me all the way just for the pleasure of watching me hurt. He is the reason I am afriad to open up to a guy again


Foolish storys



I don't know what to tell you,
as you stand in front of me
with your charming smile
and flashing eyes,
telling me that you love me.

You say,
that you want me now,
that you where wrong
that you made a mistake.
You say
that you dream of me everynight
and that you can't get me off
your mind.

You tell me
that all those times
when you harshly ignorred me
and flashed me those cold hearted glares
where because you where afriad
because 'I" wouldnt talk to "you"

I say,
I do not love you,
I hate you.
YOu don't need me,
you don't dream of me
and you wheren't afraid of me.
I was the one that spoke you YOU!
Only to watch you turn your back!

You stood there
look me in the eye
and told me
that you wanted to get to know me better,
told me that you felt somthing
just so that I could watch you
walk away
to HER!

I followed you
only to see you
tell 'her'
that you loved her
and give 'her'
her first kiss.

I cried my heart out for nights
because I read the messages
on your phone
that you sent to her
telling her of your future life with her,
you told her you wanted to marry her
spend the rest of your life with her
start a family
you told her,
that she meant the world to you
that you wanted no one else.

You told her, YOU LOVED HER,
and now
you stand before me
telling me
that it wasn't real?!
that you didn't mean what you told her?!

I gave you my heart!
Only to watch you crush it!
And all you did,
was stand there
and watch me suffer,
screaming in pain
for some kind of relief.

I am sorry
that she did not accept you
and I am sorry that it didn't work out,
but i will NOT
allow you
to hurt me again.

Just because,
You have that flashy smile of yours
and your funny jokes
don't mean
that I will fall
for your scheming lies.

And as you plead with me
at my feet
telling me that its true
that you really do mean it this time
that all of what had happened
between you and her
wasn't real
and as you feed me your storys,
I only shake my head
and turn my face,
because you don't deserve
to see me cry.

You don't deserve ME




Submitted on 2008-09-11 03:03:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments


  nicely written, true-fully it was a bit longer thank i would have preferred but nevertheless i did enjoy it! I very much enjoyed the end

I only shake my head
and turn my face,
because you don't deserve
to see me cry.

You don't deserve ME

"Because you don't deserve to see me cry"

Truly a beautiful piece of work here
| Posted on 2009-07-26 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
  This was one of the best I have read on this site to date. The naked truth of your pain, confusion, and anger are something of a marvel. While I know that something this good must be (at lest somewhat) exaggerated and crafted, it still feels like raw honesty, and that makes it all the more beautiful. I will be checking out some more of your work.
| Posted on 2008-09-11 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]


Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



165565