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see behind the picture

Author: truefruit06
ASL Info:    14/m/IN
Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6 /22 /44
Words: 50
Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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see behind the picture

can you see behind the image
its completely unreal
to see what they really are

can you see past the mirror
what happens when it shatters
what comes out

can you see behind the picture
and see whats inside
getting past the fakeness
and seeing what they are

Submitted on 2008-09-11 12:25:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  no I can't just see behind the picture
but I really wish that I could
quess i am too blind
something is misunderstood.
Very nice peace of writing, really, made me thought..
| Posted on 2008-09-11 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]

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