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    Author: truefruit06
    ASL Info:    14/m/IN
    Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6/22/44
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    can you see behind the image
    its completely unreal
    to see what they really are

    can you see past the mirror
    what happens when it shatters
    what comes out

    can you see behind the picture
    and see whats inside
    getting past the fakeness
    and seeing what they are




    Submitted on 2008-09-11 12:25:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      no I can't just see behind the picture
    but I really wish that I could
    quess i am too blind
    something is misunderstood.
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    Very nice peace of writing, really, made me thought..
    | Posted on 2008-09-11 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]


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