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    dots Submission Name: The Simplicity of Living dots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       This is my Philosophy for my Life. Joachim


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    dotsThe Simplicity of Living dots
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    The Simplicity of Living a Legendary Life without Knowing it.

    Simplicity: I am not this body
    Living: I cannot die.
    Legendary: I am a Superior Being.
    Knowing: Knowledge is mine.
    "I am"




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      Joachim
    I LOVE THIS!!!
    Your words though short are so true
    I Love how this speaks a Strong Belief in Eternal Life and shows everyone that the next life is the one we all really want the one where Happiness is Eternal and The True Living God speaks only with Love Sweet Love
    Beautiful Work!!!!!
    Looking forward to reading more from you soon
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-09-23 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      You've outdone yourself this time, my friend. It's amazing how you managed to squeeze a life's worth of thoughts and struggles and revelations into such a tiny(and amazing) poem, without risking to sacrifice quality for the sake of concision. How simple, indeed, but actually how complex and difficult it is to BE and, most importantly, to understand and appreciate what you are. Sadly, such a small amount of people are conscious of the fact that they are Superior and even fewer seek Knowledge. And we do not have to seek far. Knowledge is inside each and every one of us. But only the lucky ones truly posess it. And those are the ones who live a legendary life. And frankly, I believe they DO know it.
    It is always a pleasure and a breath of fresh air to read your pieces. They manage to surprise me every time. (In this particular case, the "I am" at the end left me with no words. So simple and yet...)
    Love,
    Angie.
    | Posted on 2008-09-14 00:00:00 | by Angie444 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yea, Yea, Yea,
    go tell it to the people
    to wash themselves in grace ,
    He's there in the feeble
    staring you in the face.

    YEA,YEA, YEA,
    when you do a nay,nay,nay,
    seek sorrow and to Him pray,
    He's listens to your every bray.

    He's The Being All Seeing ,
    He tramps on your faults
    then smiles at your fleeing
    from the one with evil salts.

    I am constantly amazed that minds can speak of such glory. You have it right-on. the simple life comes from the ledgendary knowledge of The Only One who is The I AM. Thank you for making my day.
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Easier said than done, but by believing, we could achieve great things. Only if all can just live life rather than just trying too.

    I like you philosophy's, there's always something one can take home.
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]
      I do not understand. Is this written form your own perspective, or are you writing from the perspective of God (or what ever deity you subscribe to)?
    | Posted on 2008-09-11 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]


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