I LOVE THIS!!!
Your words though short are so true
I Love how this speaks a Strong Belief in Eternal Life and shows everyone that the next life is the one we all really want the one where Happiness is Eternal and The True Living God speaks only with Love Sweet Love
Looking forward to reading more from you soon
You've outdone yourself this time, my friend. It's amazing how you managed to squeeze a life's worth of thoughts and struggles and revelations into such a tiny(and amazing) poem, without risking to sacrifice quality for the sake of concision. How simple, indeed, but actually how complex and difficult it is to BE and, most importantly, to understand and appreciate what you are. Sadly, such a small amount of people are conscious of the fact that they are Superior and even fewer seek Knowledge. And we do not have to seek far. Knowledge is inside each and every one of us. But only the lucky ones truly posess it. And those are the ones who live a legendary life. And frankly, I believe they DO know it.
It is always a pleasure and a breath of fresh air to read your pieces. They manage to surprise me every time. (In this particular case, the "I am" at the end left me with no words. So simple and yet...)