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    dots Submission Name: sondots
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    Author: The Wolverine
    ASL Info:    23/M/MA
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 74/137/91
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Happy
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       just wrote this off the top of my head, please let me have a reaction or your thoughts, and i promise i'll look at your stuff and reciprocate!!!

    -The Wolverine


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    dotssondots
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    Well you think you're all alone
    but you don't know that inside your home,
    are everyone that cares for you
    yeah you know it's true

    just look inside your heart
    and start to see you really ain't apart
    from them you know it too

    and you know that this mood will pass, yeah
    if you just get up and ask why you let yourself kill you

    because you suffered enough
    and you don't need to act so tough
    because no matter what, i know you don't
    think so but
    you're never alone,
    the ones you love are still inside you now
    no you ain't alone, the telephone don't need
    to ring, because in yourself is everything
    you need to know, yeah that you need to grow

    step outside and see, that it's beautiful for you and me
    and if it's raining inside you shouldn't hide from the sun
    because no matter the distance, you and me are one

    yeah, you and me are one
    you are the sun
    you are my sun




    Submitted on 2008-09-12 02:26:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was really good. I like the theme and the rhythm. It's done nicely. Where did you get this? Or did you compose it? In any way, you did quite well. Keep going!

    Annie
    | Posted on 2009-01-22 00:00:00 | by unnamedtear | [ Reply to This ]
      Happy Friday!!!

    I've had a thoughtful couple of days and this went right along with my theme for today - remembering we are all part of the source and there is a oneness that reflects not loneliness but connection.

    Thanks for sharing! Great!

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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