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    dots Submission Name: Open Door (Revised)dots
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    Author: Namlooc20
    ASL Info:    26/Male/Spokane, WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 359/327/107
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 683
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Revised and not so twisted. This is what I really meant instead of the last version which seemed to have two meanings, which it did.


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    dotsOpen Door (Revised)dots
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    I want you to know
    that this wasn't easy
    Thinking of you,
    making my stomach queasy

    sitting and waiting,
    give me the results
    biting and pacing,
    just pick up the calls

    Its not about you
    its about me I swear
    no I don't like you
    I like her over there.

    You're my best friend
    the only person I seek approval from
    but your glare just rends
    then here the yelling comes

    I know I'm still with her
    I know its belated
    But I just prefer
    to be sedated

    Like I did with you
    Like I've done in the past
    something I could hold onto
    not something that would last

    but there is the door
    I can see it clear
    its open like a sore
    but I just stand here

    I won't move an inch
    And its been said
    I seem to like the pinch
    This thing has gone to my head.




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      This seemed like it was about a relationship and your heart was the open door. I didn't read the original but this was good. Keep it up!

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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