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    dots Submission Name: do you even knowdots

    Author: truefruit06
    ASL Info:    14/m/IN
    Elite Ratio:    1.5 - 6/22/44
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       i guess some friends you lose and i sure lost a lot of them... what a bunch of ass holes

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    dotsdo you even knowdots

    do you even know
    what is hidden behind
    the smile

    do you even know
    what its like to hurt

    do you even know
    what its like
    when everything is gone
    and your alone

    does anyone even know
    how it feels to be crushed
    underfoot of someone you

    no no one ever knew

    Submitted on 2008-09-12 12:41:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cool my brother it is a nice work but i am of the opinion the poetry is an art form and like other art form it should entertain ,inspire and educate.Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]

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