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    dots Submission Name: Reclaiming Rage - A rant for Womendots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 313
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsReclaiming Rage - A rant for Womendots
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    Seething snakes spitting poison
    Vile corrosive attacks
    Heart halves tearing apart
    Drop the bomb and let it burn
    Destruction feels imminent
    Rage is breath on fire
    It is a rampage of adrenalin
    Flaming like lava
    Through veins
    In anguish
    Fingers stamp out words on these keys
    Chest is bubbling in acid
    Screams caught in the windpipe
    Ready to implode at any minute.
    Flares to Sekhmet!
    A desperate plea for help
    Waging war, hot eruptions
    Long term suppressors of women
    (oh how we have suppressed ourselves
    and allowed ourselves to be suppressed)
    LET ME SPEAK
    I HAVE A RIGHT TO MY EMOTIONS
    HEAR ME ROAR
    Wholeness stealers
    Bite yourselves back
    You are no longer welcome here
    Thieves, slave makers
    Fear filled controllers
    Eat your own projections
    And let my full power
    ERESS
    I will not be contained by your narrow minded
    8 by 8 box
    I will not be squashed down
    And forced into your expectations
    FREE ME
    I am woman
    I AM WOMAN

    ďBe nice
    Be like a mouse
    Submit, be permissive
    Lie down and be walked all over
    Say yes when you mean no
    Apologise for your existence
    Do not dance
    Do not sing
    Do not value your creativity
    Do not let out your emotions
    Sit on your rage
    Til it twists your body in pain
    Please
    Appease
    Be ashamed of being you
    Do not stand up for yourself
    Do not demonstrate your true power
    Evil, witch, downright bitch,
    Harlot, prostitute
    ONLY a mother, INDEED
    (Yes she who sets your foundations for life)
    Donít value yourself
    Be worthless
    Put your needs last
    Donít show the real you
    Donít be individual
    Donít voice your pain
    Hide behind your smile
    (All the while
    dying inside)

    LIES ALL LIES
    Bondage and ties

    Bitterness can be so sweet
    Released into contained words

    Vented now
    Contented now




    Submitted on 2008-09-12 13:23:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Funny how we get angry at OURSELVES for "allowing" this to happen...

    the mind-[censored] that is life

    Oh, to be thought equal for just one day

    For assertion to be seen as strong instead of [censored]y

    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]


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