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    dots Submission Name: Timesdots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 156/203/217
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 903



    Description:
       about nothing in particular... random thoughts that mean nothing really... well some do, others are insignificant... kind of lameage here, but whateves


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTimesdots
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    There are times,
    That I cry,
    Out at night,
    For you,

    There are times,
    Can’t escape,
    This nightmare,
    I fear of you,

    There are times,
    I only wish,
    I only hope,
    You stay with me,
    Forever,

    You say you love me,
    But how can I know for sure,
    You say you want me,
    But baby please,
    Tell me more,
    Tell me more,

    Sometimes I wish,
    You were here,
    All the time,
    Hoping, just for once,
    Maybe baby, I’d be right,

    Sometimes I pray,
    You go away,
    Just give me space,
    But when you do,
    Ooh, I’m missing you,
    I’m missing you,

    Baby, baby, do you know,
    Every day I love you more,
    Every day I wish you close,
    If only now forever,





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    ||| Comments |||
      its a nice poem i like it... the flow could be better but its still good.

    and courtney is rite u do use a lot of comma..

    kaz
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by submarine | [ Reply to This ]
      You use A LOT of commas.

    Therefore ending the shortest comment known to humankind.

    Peace, Love, and Cupcakes.

    -Your Lover
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by CourtneyLynne | [ Reply to This ]



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