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    dots Submission Name: Timesdots

    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 463
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 903

       about nothing in particular... random thoughts that mean nothing really... well some do, others are insignificant... kind of lameage here, but whateves

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    There are times,
    That I cry,
    Out at night,
    For you,

    There are times,
    Canít escape,
    This nightmare,
    I fear of you,

    There are times,
    I only wish,
    I only hope,
    You stay with me,

    You say you love me,
    But how can I know for sure,
    You say you want me,
    But baby please,
    Tell me more,
    Tell me more,

    Sometimes I wish,
    You were here,
    All the time,
    Hoping, just for once,
    Maybe baby, Iíd be right,

    Sometimes I pray,
    You go away,
    Just give me space,
    But when you do,
    Ooh, Iím missing you,
    Iím missing you,

    Baby, baby, do you know,
    Every day I love you more,
    Every day I wish you close,
    If only now forever,

    Submitted on 2008-09-12 13:28:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its a nice poem i like it... the flow could be better but its still good.

    and courtney is rite u do use a lot of comma..

    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by submarine | [ Reply to This ]
      You use A LOT of commas.

    Therefore ending the shortest comment known to humankind.

    Peace, Love, and Cupcakes.

    -Your Lover
    | Posted on 2008-09-12 00:00:00 | by CourtneyLynne | [ Reply to This ]

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