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Me Vs. Computer Screen


Author: was_i_ever_real
ASL Info:    23 _ f _ tx
Elite Ratio:    8 - 194 /91 /52
Words: 191
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 1175
Average Vote:    4.0000
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Description:


*Poets note* This is supposed to be taken as part comical, part serious. I am not making fun of internet loves.

Maybe just a little. I'm sure we've all been there though.
And this is not from personal experience..


Me Vs. Computer Screen



Fumbling fingers,
And the clickety clack of the keyboard...
Sitting close to the screen so you never miss a thing.

Like a mad man and an interesting wall.
Dreaming of animation and
embraces
that will never come
for a wall is a wall is a wall.

On the edge of your seat
and half out of your mind
for this fingertip romance.

"You don't understand.
This person's one of a kind.
I'm far too shy to do this in....
Life.
You will never understand me
like she does.
Oh, the curves of her....
Arial font.
She always Laughs Out Loud at my jokes...
not like you."

No, not like me.
I can only stand here, it seems.
Flesh - wanting your flesh...
capable of running my fingers through your hair
...and there would be warmth in my *hugs*
Your Peter Pan kiss isn't the thimble
I could place in your hand, or my lips against yours...
It's the :* that you're dying for....

Everything she pretends to be
and without a computer screen
to separate us.

So why do you love her
And not me?




Submitted on 2008-09-12 15:55:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i dont no what to say.... it was very remindive
( is that even a word?)
| Posted on 2011-03-29 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]
  wow amazing. This poem brought me back to when I was younger.
| Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by HimeManko | [ Reply to This ]
  Cute. thumble?
| Posted on 2008-09-13 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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