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    dots Submission Name: Me Vs. Computer Screendots

    Author: was_i_ever_real
    ASL Info:    23 _ f _ tx
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 194/91/52
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 728
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       *Poets note* This is supposed to be taken as part comical, part serious. I am not making fun of internet loves.

    Maybe just a little. I'm sure we've all been there though.
    And this is not from personal experience..

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMe Vs. Computer Screendots

    Fumbling fingers,
    And the clickety clack of the keyboard...
    Sitting close to the screen so you never miss a thing.

    Like a mad man and an interesting wall.
    Dreaming of animation and
    that will never come
    for a wall is a wall is a wall.

    On the edge of your seat
    and half out of your mind
    for this fingertip romance.

    "You don't understand.
    This person's one of a kind.
    I'm far too shy to do this in....
    You will never understand me
    like she does.
    Oh, the curves of her....
    Arial font.
    She always Laughs Out Loud at my jokes...
    not like you."

    No, not like me.
    I can only stand here, it seems.
    Flesh - wanting your flesh...
    capable of running my fingers through your hair
    ...and there would be warmth in my *hugs*
    Your Peter Pan kiss isn't the thimble
    I could place in your hand, or my lips against yours...
    It's the :* that you're dying for....

    Everything she pretends to be
    and without a computer screen
    to separate us.

    So why do you love her
    And not me?

    Submitted on 2008-09-12 15:55:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i dont no what to say.... it was very remindive
    ( is that even a word?)
    | Posted on 2011-03-29 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]
      wow amazing. This poem brought me back to when I was younger.
    | Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by HimeManko | [ Reply to This ]
      Cute. thumble?
    | Posted on 2008-09-13 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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