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    dots Submission Name: sunlight, moonlightdots
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    Author: wizardmaster
    ASL Info:    2314/girl/China
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 7/7/21
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 985
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    dotssunlight, moonlightdots
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    an everlasting flower,
    touched by the dew that is
    rain.

    A flower without a stem,
    it stays in the sky
    following you wherever you go.

    When rain falls the sun is covered
    with the mourning of the stars
    when dusk falls it is hidden by the moon,

    but even in the darkest hours of the night
    somewhere, still, the sun is shining.




    Submitted on 2008-09-12 20:53:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like your poem better It reads like it come's from the heart & soul
    | Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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