theres nothing inspiring about the matrix revolutions,the film stinks,also,the poem is very bland,I dont know if it would be better if youve seen the film or not,but I think you could elaborate much more,good luck
This is so beautiful is such a simple way that it left me grasping for breath and words for a moment and I had to read it again to get another dose of its power.. I love how you focus not once, but twice on the want and need for the kiss as it seems to add to the depth of the feeling behind it..
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