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    Author: submarine
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    Words: 146
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       just a poem on how my mind is like. i think in pictures and capture memories in pictures... hope u like it..


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    Iíve got pictures in my head
    Of everything in my life,
    Thereís laughter and joy in some
    Others have sadness in them.
    Theyíre reminders of my life
    Everything I canít forget.
    Memories of good and bad
    And things I sometimes regret.

    My mind is like a photo album
    I carry everywhere I go.
    And when something happens
    Thereís a click, a flash
    And another picture in store.
    Itís a memory bank of photos
    I never get tired of looking at
    Moments to be treasured
    Of my life and others.

    My whole life is like a snapshot
    Sometimes I feel like a celebrity
    But I wonít turn off the camera
    It captures life perfectly.
    And if you think I donít remember
    a moment or two,
    You couldnít be more wrong
    Coz the camera's always flashing
    Storing the pictures in my head.







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