I knew you werent right for me
but then you leave, then you leave
And even though I didn't need you
I'm still broken, Wheres the breakthrough?
I thought I didn't need you here
You said you loved, but I wouldn't hear
Now that your gone, I want you back
But you wont come, wont cut any slack
So when I get over you
Finally think I'll make it through
Then you finally want my heart
So now I'm torn, and falling apart
Just go away, your prescence hurts
When you're near, I feel like dirt
You confuse my emotion
As If i'm drowning in an ocean
An ocean of pain, so wide so deep
I cry at night, and cannot sleep
What else is there? This is all I know
And now I must let you go.
| This is a magnificant poem chan, even if it does sting me a little. Every word you chose seemed to fit so perfectly and made it easy for you to say what you wanted to say. Lovely job||| Posted on 2008-10-20 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ] || wow.....I don't have much to say. Don't know what to say to such a poem. Good job seems to low, you deserve so much more than what I could ever say. |
I don't think that I have EVER said this to anyone, and if I have, I take it back, THis is the BEST poem, I have read, that touched me, as much as this one did. thank you Soooo much, for writing it.
|| Posted on 2008-09-30 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ] |