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    dots Submission Name: "My Prayer For You"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
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    dots"My Prayer For You"dots
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    I've made a little prayer for you
    as you journey far away
    I pray that Angels follow
    and protect you night and day.

    I pray that you are safe and well
    in all that you undertake
    and may you be successful
    in the efforts that you make.

    And, every once in awhile
    may you feel the strangest glow
    that will come from my well wishes
    and because I love you so.

    I pray that you'll remember
    the place you love the best
    our humble hearth and home
    where you'll return to rest.

    And at night time, on your pillow
    as you lay your head to sleep
    may an Angel bless your slumber
    and hold you in Heaven's keep.

    Ron Cole
    August 2008




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      i love this one. it has such pure and clean meanings. its so caring and loving, that if this was meant for someone, i bet it made them feel so speical!

    good job Ron
    | Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by twistedchick | [ Reply to This ]
      Ron, I had to comment again because I have read this poem for many days and "IT" has comforted me when I become frustrated learning the guitar.

    I thank you for this wonderful piece that brings solace to my calloused fingers!!!

    Lots of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-09-23 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very beautifully written and read perfect!
    You have a wonderful talent and this could be a inspirational poster or greeting card.
    Superb!!!

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-09-18 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Well Ron,......nothing like the power of prayer to stir the emotions !!!!!! You know something my friend......your writing reminds me of the the greatest singer ever...(Jim Reeves)......warm, homely, soothing, evocative, calming, peaceful, thoughtful, ans as smooth as velvet !!!!!!

    That says it al.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      What a beautiful and caring prayer/poem, Ron! There must be a bit of angel in your pen. I'm certain that for whomever you wrote this one it will be a treasure. Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Once again I'm stunned by your writing skills. This is such a beautiful piece - I tried to pick one bit that I liked the most but couldn't :P. Ah well sorry this is such a short comment, gotta go panic some more about what to take to Asia hehe. xx

    ~lou~
    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really meaningful, and I'm sure whorever you are dedicating this to will be touched by it. :)
    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by whchong | [ Reply to This ]


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