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"My Prayer For You"


Author: Ron Cole
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"My Prayer For You"



I've made a little prayer for you
as you journey far away
I pray that Angels follow
and protect you night and day.

I pray that you are safe and well
in all that you undertake
and may you be successful
in the efforts that you make.

And, every once in awhile
may you feel the strangest glow
that will come from my well wishes
and because I love you so.

I pray that you'll remember
the place you love the best
our humble hearth and home
where you'll return to rest.

And at night time, on your pillow
as you lay your head to sleep
may an Angel bless your slumber
and hold you in Heaven's keep.

Ron Cole
August 2008




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  i love this one. it has such pure and clean meanings. its so caring and loving, that if this was meant for someone, i bet it made them feel so speical!

good job Ron
| Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by twistedchick | [ Reply to This ]
  Ron, I had to comment again because I have read this poem for many days and "IT" has comforted me when I become frustrated learning the guitar.

I thank you for this wonderful piece that brings solace to my calloused fingers!!!

Lots of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
| Posted on 2008-09-23 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  This was very beautifully written and read perfect!
You have a wonderful talent and this could be a inspirational poster or greeting card.
Superb!!!

love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
| Posted on 2008-09-18 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  Well Ron,......nothing like the power of prayer to stir the emotions !!!!!! You know something my friend......your writing reminds me of the the greatest singer ever...(Jim Reeves)......warm, homely, soothing, evocative, calming, peaceful, thoughtful, ans as smooth as velvet !!!!!!

That says it al.

Frank.
| Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  What a beautiful and caring prayer/poem, Ron! There must be a bit of angel in your pen. I'm certain that for whomever you wrote this one it will be a treasure. Sharon
| Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
  Once again I'm stunned by your writing skills. This is such a beautiful piece - I tried to pick one bit that I liked the most but couldn't :P. Ah well sorry this is such a short comment, gotta go panic some more about what to take to Asia hehe. xx

~lou~
| Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]
  This is really meaningful, and I'm sure whorever you are dedicating this to will be touched by it. :)
| Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by whchong | [ Reply to This ]


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