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    dots Submission Name: Acherondots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAcherondots
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    Everytime she cries
    she wipes tears away.
    So, not to lose the taste.
    Saying she loves
    the taste of pain.
    She's entitled to
    her brittle nerves,
    faintly disturbed.
    The sun doesn't shine,
    she claims.
    It's from inside,
    we cling,
    that fires the day.
    All the saints are changed
    in the worst of ways.
    That's her gift.
    To examine the sky,
    grounding all the lifts,
    if she's left alone
    To silently cry.




    Submitted on 2008-09-15 04:50:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "It's from the inside, we cling,"
    Yeah. It truly is. It's not a physical thing at all. With our hearts and souls we cling to the familiar and the comforting. At least, that's what that line meant to me...most of the piece seems pretty clear.
    Although I'm not sure why this piece is called Acheron.
    For some reason I'm picturing a river. Haha.
    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]


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