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    dots Submission Name: Alone In The Darkdots
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    Author: all2rest
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 30/40/34
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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       Everyboody gets lonely sometimes ;)


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    dotsAlone In The Darkdots
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    Alone In the Dark

    It's the night when I feel the most by myself
    It's those dark spaces empty and cold

    Where the moonlight should cut through
    and open the world
    only darkness runs bold

    When the only thing visible is the void of your own room and the sound of your own voice
    gets old.

    I feel so alone

    I feel so unwanted

    No matter who you are, what you've done,
    where you've been, or who you know
    you'll always feel alone in the dark.




    Submitted on 2008-09-16 06:52:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I do feel alone in the dark, but most of the times I like that feeling, welcome it really. I rather hate to be/feel alone in the sunlight, thats just tragic. =P

    "When the only thing visible is the void of your own room and the sound of your own voice
    gets old."

    Those lines above were my favorite, very relatable for me. Anyhow, great job! Keep it up, hun. Have an amazing day!!!

    --Daisy (Thanks for the comment on Soul Forgotten by the way)
    | Posted on 2010-05-05 00:00:00 | by sensetofeel | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel alone in the dark sometimes. I don't always feel that way, but when I do it really
    is a big feeling. I like this peice, it shows emotion.
    | Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by stormybluerose | [ Reply to This ]


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