The Lead Tree by eggshells

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Submission Name: The Lead Tree dots

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Author:	eggshells
ASL Info:	27/M/VA
Elite Ratio:	3.24 - 23/54/57
Words:	98

Class/Type:	Poetry/Fuck it all
Total Views:	126
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	572

Description:
There's a metallica reference here, see if you can catch it! lol...

The Lead Tree dots

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I am the lies that make you real
I am the dreams that you fear
I am the flower you cannot feel
I am the lead tree!

I am the sun beating down on you
I am the leper, sad but true!
I am the thoughts, oh so blue
I am the lead tree!

I am the evil that makes you tick!
I am death when it doesn't come quick!
I am sleepless tired and sick!
I AM THE LEAD TREE!

OHH OHHH OHH!
WON'T YOU LEAVE ME BE?!

end
fin fin fin
-eggshells-

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Hah. Like, I really dig this poem, and, straight up, I don't know why. It kind of sounds like something you would a marching group of soldiers would sing or something. It's quite cool.

Seriously. I actually rather love this poem.

DOn't change a thing.

Though, I'm wondering, is there something behind this 'lead tree thing'?

I mean I take it...that a tree is something big and ancient and unmovable. And lead, is like poisonous...and so... yeah.

Hahah.

Anyways, thanks for sharing. Peace out!

<3 Sweets
| Posted on 2009-05-18 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]

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