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    dots Submission Name: romandots
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    Author: augustcranes
    ASL Info:    16 - Female - Underwood
    Elite Ratio:    6.3 - 23/8/6
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 106
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    dotsromandots
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    my husband drank the champagne
    places the glass upon the books -
    with the wet circle of time eroding it's texture
    & leaves without a word;
    i fondly remember the liquid as it tingled
    the rounded receivers in the back of my throat
    as you begin listing childhood vows half-heard:

    when i grew older, my breast burst my shirt
    before they would have been swept along your moist avenue
    each piece of my dark hair, a simple dark river
    your fingers sailing succedent softly in time:

    softly spoken breaths, miraculously enjoyed
    and our eyes were journeys past cold wooden floors
    and paint fumes and dust:

    as subtle as the refined taste of apples
    of champagnes, of golden streams only in dreams
    our letters in respected stokes have crossed lifetimes
    further before they crashed to the Earth
    not so tragic
    but floating as wingless birds







    Submitted on 2008-09-16 22:28:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      BRAVO! You've done beautifully. I must say I really enjoyed reading this. The first lines just grab you. I'm not very good with the commenting thing, so please forgive me for this being so short. Again, good job!
    Beautiful, yet Corrupted
    Dominique
    | Posted on 2008-10-03 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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