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    dots Submission Name: I'm coming back.dots
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    Author: faded color
    ASL Info:    18/M/That one place
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 36/32/37
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 878
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 976



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    dotsI'm coming back.dots
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    Hello everyone. I am bringing "The Puppet Series" back, IF, that is, there are people still waiting for it. I need at least 5 comments telling me that you miss it. More are definatly welcome. Waiting to find out what happens to Sam and Matt? Want to know what Matt will do about Jackie? Then send a comment to me. And I do appologize for taking up anyones time that is reading this thinking it was a poem, but while I have your attention, let me go ahead and ask you to read the first few parts of my story. I have written much much more on it, and I am nearing the end of it. If it gains rep on here, I may consider publishing it, But I want it to go through here first. If you comment on it, please, Only constructive criticism. I do not care about some guy with no life just here to piss people off. Good, and corrective comments are welcome. Those who comment, will recieve comments in return. From Faded Color, This is Shane. Good day. Peace and Providence.




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      YES dang it bring it back. I've been waiting FOREVER! And don't count on 5 coments, mine should count that many. you know what I might have to leave 5 comments if thats what it will take but ES is a bit less on comments anymore or else my writing has went way down hill one because hardly anyone comments anymore. Anyway, bring it BACK!
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    Sarah
    | Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]


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