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    dots Submission Name: Expel all that's kept insidedots
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    Author: all2rest
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 30/40/34
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsExpel all that's kept insidedots
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    Shape-shifting, morphing and becoming tangible.

    Escaping every chance they get.

    dripping, the fat of life falls to the floor and nothing can keep steady.

    Adapting, evolving, uniting with its host.

    Assimilating through influence, now invisible to the naked eye.



    Unused empty energy, unforgiving synergy,

    my words became my enemy.



    Permanent in stone, carved into my bones

    etched upon the tomb of broken hearted souls.

    Seeping through every crack, oozing out the edge

    bubbling in solitude, erasing all that's left.



    It took you over, the parasite is complete in your mind

    don't be left alone or you will be led into it's binds.

    It's poison laced in sweet perfume

    acrid to the ones you've used.



    Bathe away in ecstacy beneath the shade of ignorance

    dry in the light of your tyranny, decree the righteous your defense.

    Away away unbearable shame

    Expel all that's kept inside.

    Liberated through exile from a tainted, blind perception



    I am free now


    I have sustained imagination






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