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    dots Submission Name: Just call me...dots
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    Author: all2rest
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 30/40/34
    Words: 257
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 664
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1296



    Description:
       I know eveyone has good and bad times and some people go through extremely painful moments in life. It's not always as easy as some people make it sound, but it's not impossible. Take your life, make something new and beautiful, we all deserve happiness.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsJust call me...dots
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    Just call me an optimist, go ahead say it, it's true!

    I hear the world around me and process my own views.

    Listen to the winds as they tickle brown-leaved trees

    Don't miss an opportunity to feel the soft, cooling breeze.

    Are you really paying attention to the palette that surrounds us.

    Each hue an open invitation to layer over our worries with a brush.

    Feel the air of restoration, breathe it in, please, fill your chest.

    Exhale the sounds of expectations, your words can bring the best.

    Grasp the earth, all it's gritty, stony soil.

    Grind it, shape it, mold it, do not flee the toil.

    Sweat out your frustrations and exert your inner pain.

    It's fuel for the fire, forging all life has for you to gain.

    It's squandered if it goes untouched, just rotting out your soul.

    Employ each piece of brokeness to propel you towards your goal.

    The world is just a template, a canvas, an empty page.


    So just call me an optimist

    as I create life day to day





    Submitted on 2008-09-18 05:39:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice write. good timing and a brilliant way to come the brain. Very nice write
    | Posted on 2008-09-20 00:00:00 | by folioliedadeep | [ Reply to This ]
      Really liked this poem. May I ask why the double spacing? Not really use to that. But that don't mean it was something bad. Just different.
    Good write.

    ~SK
    | Posted on 2008-09-18 00:00:00 | by faded color | [ Reply to This ]


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