Even though I didn't get the number of comments asked for, I will continue to write on my story. I hope that more people will comment on it and give me more of a correctional comment. This story will continue with the next chapter "The Awakening". I will continue to post every day next week on different chapters, If, that is, everything continues as planned. I can only type this while in my Interactive Multimedia class, so if it is a day were I need to do a project, then so be it. For everyday I miss, I will try and make up lost time the next day by posting two chapters. But don't hold me to that. If you have any questions about my story, you may ask in a comment, or in a private message. Good day! Peace and Providence.